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    dots Submission Name: ring of lifedots

    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       oldies. Just thought of life cycle in science and thought it a bit practical.

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    dotsring of lifedots

    the ring of life the life of a woman,
    happiness and end to the life of wonder,
    could it be in all that's over is the life
    yet they say it is the start or a major blunder.

    could we mean it in all and entire,
    or would it be hard to make it on fire,
    is it new or old the tradition ,
    the tradition of history the moods of desire.

    in the sunset the moonlight of the night,
    the ring of life the part at the height.

    Submitted on 2008-03-03 02:57:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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