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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 526
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    EVERY time my mind gets hot
    study and study and find and sought.
    Remember vomit which is done,
    what we gain is really none.
    But what we get is what will decide,
    life depends cant keep education aside.
    So now i cool too much down,
    no interest arises for me to crown.
    There are times where arise tension,
    what is written is not a superstition.




    Submitted on 2008-03-03 02:58:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      <what we gain is really none> (Y)(Y)(Y)

    but in the last two lines it seemed you forced the rythm and it didnt go to well !!
    I guess you can revise it !!

    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by Dying Young | [ Reply to This ]


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