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    dots Submission Name: the dying virgindots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       oldies fourth love in life.


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    dotsthe dying virgindots
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    might of love and all that it costs
    feeling of life on earth and above
    transcend to hope null for it seems
    crying with the arrow,the unknown bow.

    fell from the top the beauty of a man
    king to be described sorrow in the sand
    came the end of the kalabakadhalan of eternity
    for all his heart was like a dying virgin.
    ---keestu

    kalabkadhalan--meant to be the one forever in love




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