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    dots Submission Name: The path(education)dots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
    Total Views: 626
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    dotsThe path(education)dots
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    every human walks in a path unknown,
    how to go in it is not shown.
    Parents are the one who guide us to the door,
    for reaching our goal where we may get a crore.
    Teachers are the one who show us the path,
    we swim deep than take a bath.
    Once we start we must end,
    time is important on how much we spend.
    Going alone is another case,
    for lonely people with problems to face.
    But every person walks in the way,
    life depends on it that is what i say.




    Submitted on 2008-03-03 03:01:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey this was awsome !! the idea is deep ... you forced the rythm but somehow its effect was good !! cz it went directly to the point !!

    <Once we start we must end,
    time is important on how much we spend.>

    this was my fav part !!!

    Great Job !!

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    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by Dying Young | [ Reply to This ]


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