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    dots Submission Name: When will i die?dots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsWhen will i die?dots
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    When will i die for i am waiting for the day,
    the gift of death as they always say,
    people in this cruel world of filth and junk,
    for all that i lived without any use.

    The seeming thought of hope that i seek,
    the endless fire of death to meet,
    the question of this worthless life to ask,
    is the day of death the freedom of my past.




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