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    dots Submission Name: Who am i?dots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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       Oldies. Saw a topic who am i(film did not see it but) and thought who then hell am i


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    dotsWho am i?dots
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    Who am i is it really me,
    or is it an image of someone like me.
    I look into a mirror and ask whether i am,
    me or really me for the question remains.
    I want to see through the mirror,
    for faces are there two.
    If there is one side of it
    then the other will be too.
    So being rational having no faith,
    for blind to be waste for the other side is nothing.




    Submitted on 2008-03-03 03:12:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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