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    dots Submission Name: Unholy Infectiondots
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    Author: Cat
    ASL Info:    17/F/Aus
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 104/87/27
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 88
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 629



    Description:
       I know, I know 'self-proclaimed Messiah' ive done it before, yada yada yada, but I just couldn't get that phrase out of my head. Originally the poem was meant to finish with the line "an unholy infection" however I realised it was way short so I added some more lines. I think it gets a bit weird after unholy infection but maybe not, maybe I'm just being overly judgemental.


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    dotsUnholy Infectiondots
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    Self-proclaimed Messiahs
    of another generation,
    Can't reach into our minds
    and demand an explanation.
    What's to tell?
    That drugs are our religion,
    the gospel of blood and lies
    spread to every region?
    While they just read
    we learned to question,
    our cynical minds
    an unholy infection.
    Barge into our lives
    without an invitation
    and with a solemn gaze,
    call it intervention.
    With a twisted smile say,
    "Oh, I forgot to mention..."
    and watch as our world
    spins in a new direction.




    Submitted on 2008-03-03 05:47:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem was very interesting. It was able to hold my attention throughout the entire thing. One thing though, some people may not know what your talking about, but to me it's kind of evident. I seriously do like this poem, your very talented.
    | Posted on 2008-03-03 00:00:00 | by hawkeye | [ Reply to This ]



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