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    dots Submission Name: Somedaydots
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    Author: rubymoon
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 128/125/72
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Someday, you will open your eyes and you will see me standing right in front of you.
         The day your eyes open, two new stars will be born. Maybe then you’ll see me
    Till then, I will be waiting right here…
         Hoping, waiting and praying with a smile on my face
    Having no right to hold something so dear
         You see…angels like you, are not meant to love demons nor mortals like me
    Spread your wings and free yourself from these chains that binds you
         Fly away; and if I see a rainbow in the sky I’ll know that you are thinking of me.









    Please do not cry, I am happy for you, truly…


         I will dance in the rain so you can see my joy and celebration
    and never my tears, ever…
         Forever and a day




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      I scarcely know how to compliment this, except to say that it is soulful and very beautiful! It literally "sings" of spirituality and a genius that truly comprehends the nature of eternity! Very beautiful, and very well expressed!
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      this is great, it flows very naturaly and i love the format. Thank you for sharing! I can't even pick a favorite line. May i send this to a friend?
    | Posted on 2008-03-03 00:00:00 | by ashik | [ Reply to This ]


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