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    dots Submission Name: Afraiddots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    23/Female/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.68 - 277/293/232
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 674
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 689



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    dotsAfraiddots
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    How can a person
    I once believed I couldn't stand
    make me blush?
    I always want you around me.
    There are times I want you
    to hold me in your arms.
    I can't see why
    you make me feel this way.
    Now you know how I feel
    and I want you even more.
    I want to kiss you,
    to be in your arms.
    But I'm afraid to go further,
    the fear of being hurt.
    I want something so badly,
    but afraid to be
    heartbroken again,
    I don't want to risk it.
    I look in your eyes,
    and I want to be with you
    so badly.
    But I'm still
    so afraid.




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