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    dots Submission Name: Worms Would Not Fathomdots
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    Author: Reckoner
    Elite Ratio:    5.04 - 122/164/128
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       The darkness before her sun shined on me


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    dotsWorms Would Not Fathomdots
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    Bad habits smolder
    in a voiceless container
    the gelatinous remains
    of a sheep strung to water
    everything that was
    consists now
    of something shaped by the former
    an adolescent suppressor

    A mold held in retrospect
    a shape that shifts
    into complete order
    the past looked bright for him
    voicing restraint
    pairing with dignity
    but a classless disorder
    would break his ties with reality

    Carefree
    and buried beneath
    his soul was flying
    though digging
    was the actual term
    he sought to reach further down
    where roots begin
    to discourage one another

    But lies carry the same familiarity underground
    as they do above the sound of the worms
    getting their fill beneath
    the lid of this silent container
    this training post for all the last embers
    all the final few words spoken
    but never in a whisper
    because they must be heard in order to suffer

    Desperate words chosen
    to decompose
    what little remained of the future
    the slight touch of a tender slime
    encompassing the whole
    of these cold dark barriers
    I touch what my breath will not swallow
    and eat what my stomach cannot digest





    Submitted on 2008-03-03 11:37:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sad, of course, a time we don't like to think about or talk about...but,.....sorry, distracted review. we are arguing right now on msn...*rolls eyes* i hate fighting with you, its the worst. ok, well this is a brilliant piece, as usual. dont know why noone has touched it yet, it's been here overnight...humph. ah well, gotta go back and talk to you now. :( I miss you. I love you. You are beautiful.

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    me
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by angelfyre | [ Reply to This ]



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