A single violin plays
of graveyard abandon
from the hands of God
to our hearts
Leaves us longing for more
from satan's score
The burning dance
of the poisen darts.
At the 2nd line it's almost as if you meant 'graveyard solo' but hey just my interpretation.I like this poem b/c it relates to the actions that triggers the winning let down of temptation,putting us back where we started,with sin.God will only tell us what we've never heard b4,we're only humans so he should compromise especially if he knows we're gonna sin. 5stars but you could have also did this poem two different ways.I would've done and posted a vice versa version.
This is a very wonderful poem. The only thing that is "different" is the second line of the poem... it kinda doesn't make sense. I still like it alot though. Keep up the writings.
Submission Name: Sin
