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    dots Submission Name: Posess medots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPosess medots
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    I was quiet, in that corner,
    Where I sat so obsessively,
    Looking to the sky,
    How you'd say it? Excessively,
    That blue, that white,
    The snow or rain,
    And the Clouds, of them they,
    Flowed your name,
    So next time you question,
    My eyes in the sky,
    I think I'll confess it,
    Just tell you why--
    No, I'm not demonized,
    But yes-- it upsets me,
    Truth is--- I just realized,
    You posess me




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    ||| Comments |||
      I wonder: is it drugs, love, passion? What is it that posesses you. I wish I knew.
    | Posted on 2008-07-31 00:00:00 | by kickit | [ Reply to This ]
      well despite what the guidlines say....lol........i love the whole thing...........nice piece of work
    | Posted on 2008-07-31 00:00:00 | by Blackphoenix14 | [ Reply to This ]
      Another Romantic from you I see.

    Very pretty, poem. Blue skies, and Love. Good combo.

    I did need to read it twice over to get a really clear picture, but worth it.
    | Posted on 2008-04-05 00:00:00 | by DiamondTears | [ Reply to This ]
      Easy and quick read what i believe a great poem is around. Flows smoothly and had alot of depth in a few words. the way it seemed almost lost of hope in the beginning and you brought it back around into a almost Dark/Happy ending was lovely the contasts were great.



    Semper Fidelis,
    Christopher
    | Posted on 2008-03-03 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]


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