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    dots Submission Name: Loving A Parasitedots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       i'm starting to call these very strange styles i'm trying Abstract Poetry. so it will be strange but i'll type Abstract at top so everyone knows.


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    dotsLoving A Parasitedots
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    Drink,
    From the goblet of my mind.
    Bathe,
    In my abundent illutation.
    Medtiate,
    On my writing's amaranthine.
    Stink,
    Obsessively forward into inception.
    Bite,
    Into adamant wielding skin.
    Taste,
    My veins filled with goety.
    Learn,
    From my phosphorescent sin.
    Love,
    My every sinew, for I am poetry.




    Submitted on 2008-03-03 16:30:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      poetry yes, we are like vampires feeding off of it...

    and it is like a vampire itself...something to live eternally...

    poems never really die...the poets do...but the bite the poems receive from the pen...keeps them alive forever and forever.
    | Posted on 2011-03-18 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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