Loving A Parasite by Soulraven

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Submission Name: Loving A Parasite dots

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Author:	Soulraven
ASL Info:	22/Male/Illinois
Elite Ratio:	3.87 - 475/442/127
Words:	47

Class/Type:	Poetry/
Total Views:	53
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Description:
i'm starting to call these very strange styles i'm trying Abstract Poetry. so it will be strange but i'll type Abstract at top so everyone knows.

Loving A Parasite dots

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Drink,
From the goblet of my mind.
Bathe,
In my abundent illutation.
Medtiate,
On my writing's amaranthine.
Stink,
Obsessively forward into inception.
Bite,
Into adamant wielding skin.
Taste,
My veins filled with goety.
Learn,
From my phosphorescent sin.
Love,
My every sinew, for I am poetry.

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