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    dots Submission Name: Destiny Warriorsdots

    Author: essence of life
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    dotsDestiny Warriorsdots

    Step in to my world and realize the truth,what you know can't be real if it's not intertwined with others. Those who can change somesones destiny have been here and are warriors who can change the affects of life and death.

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      to the extreme that is so right. Keep writing
    | Posted on 2008-07-15 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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