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    dots Submission Name: Destiny Warriorsdots
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    Author: essence of life
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    Step in to my world and realize the truth,what you know can't be real if it's not intertwined with others. Those who can change somesones destiny have been here and are warriors who can change the affects of life and death.




    Submitted on 2008-03-03 19:29:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      to the extreme that is so right. Keep writing
    | Posted on 2008-07-15 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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