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    dots Submission Name: Suicide Notedots
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    Author: Aethyx
    ASL Info:    14/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 25/23/15
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Rant/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 831
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1067



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       My suicide note, whenever I actually do it.


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    dotsSuicide Notedots
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    Hey mom, this part's for you
    I told you I was crazy
    I thought you knew
    But you ignored me
    And looked away
    Yeah, she'll be alright for another day
    We can't afford the pills she needs
    We'll just have to wait
    While she bleeds

    Oh and dad thanks a lot
    I hope you burn in hell
    Beat me like I don't matter
    And it's my fault you got jail?
    I hate your guts
    I hope you die
    Cause you didn't care
    How much I cried
    You saw my pain
    Drove me insane
    By the way
    This isn't a game

    And Josh I love you
    Don't ever forget
    But I couldn't take
    Always getting hit
    Knocked around like it didn't matter
    The world is just gonna make you sadder
    It gets worse before it gets better
    But baby please do me this favor
    Hang on for dear life
    Literally
    Hang on love
    And live for me






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      I'm sorry for the ignorance of others but everyone has a story that got them to their own hell and I'm sorry it's taken out on you.

    I've been crazy, I've tried to kill myself and I've also seen the days of dark turn to days of light.
    You are creative and crazy is only what other people call people they can't understand.
    Find that ray of light within you = you don't have to perpetuate the anger, the violence or any of it.

    Hang in there and keep your creative springs flowing! Life can be what you want it to be

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so sad. I can totally relate to this. I don't say that about every suicide note I read, either. I've literally laid in my bed and thought about shooting my brains out, but I can't, you know? But, once again, that hit close to home for me, and I almost cried. Not a lot of poems, stories, whatever can make me do that.
    AngeL
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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