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    dots Submission Name: Ever...?dots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 598
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1247



    Description:
       Just something that I came up with, after writing my "inspiration" journal here on elite.


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    dotsEver...?dots
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    Ever walk into a room
    And want it to go silent
    Because everyone thought you looked amazing?
    Ever walk into a room
    And not want it to go silent
    Because everyone thought you looked stupid?
    Ever sit in a room
    And listen to a conversation
    And know that you were a part of it?
    Ever sit in a room
    And listen to a conversation
    And wish you were a part of it?
    Ever drive past a party
    And have everyone wave
    Because they know you are just parking the car?
    Ever drive past a party
    And have everyone wave
    Because they are really hoping you just keep driving?
    Ever wear a dress
    And make your date speechless
    Because you look beautiful in it?
    Ever wear a dress
    And make your date speechless
    Because you look horrendous in it?
    Ever have a group of friends
    That included you
    And made you feel like family?
    Ever have a group of friends
    That excluded you
    And made you feel like dirt?
    Ever write a story
    To make people understand
    How you feel in a way you canít put into words?
    Ever think that you could relate to someone like me?




    Submitted on 2008-03-04 17:40:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey hi i liked this alot of questions that anyone can relate to the answers for the readers of this piece can remain a thought to themselves

    well done

    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-03-05 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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