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    dots Submission Name: In a manner of a ripper(added versedots

    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 41/129/120
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 601
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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    dotsIn a manner of a ripper(added versedots

    I am a master of mischief
    I even cause so many griefs
    Yet I can't escape myself from grieving
    Or find a way to taste some feelings

    I am a man of flesh and blood
    I have seen many colors of horror
    I am a man of flesh and blood
    Cause I never had the fear of terror

    Yet you still expose a grin
    A smile that i can never forget

    In a manner of a ripper
    An Empathy of fellow slasher
    I believe we're still human afterall
    After those message we left on walls

    We believe that the punishment goes to the Tyrants
    Whose suffering forced to be shared
    Whose agony materialized in bullets which they fired
    Who believe one's sins is worth for thousand innocents

    Do they deserve to be accepted as human
    Or God's intended error for an alarm
    That there are people worthier to be alive
    And there were people whose death is an exception

    I dont care if our deeds lead us into prolonged escapade
    I dont care if our self righteous belief is designed mistake
    We still believe we are standing on the right side
    We still have each other as revived Bonnie and Clyde

    Submitted on 2008-03-04 21:55:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you wanted thoughts... my first tought was NICE !!
    | Posted on 2008-03-06 00:00:00 | by Dying Young | [ Reply to This ]

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