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When i'm gone


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 262
Class/Type: Lyrics /Longing
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When i'm gone



You told me how much it hurts
saying these things
like our hearts weren't colliding and the love was subsiding
and that's true
i never loved you
you're making me crazy and it's time that i'm wasting

standing alone, watching you walk away
(everything will be okay...)

I want you to know
you're my best heartbreak, the greatest mistake, and a feeling i can't shake.
why can't you see
this love can't be empty.
Maybe one day,
you'll wake up and miss me.

You cried on the phone last night
you said that's it over you're never looking back
over your shoulder.

close the curtain on yesterday
and forget my face forever,
(things will never be the same... )

I want you to know
you're my best heartbreak, the greatest mistake, and a feeling i can't shake.
why can't you see
this love can't be empty.
Maybe one day,
you'll wake up and miss me.

Open your eyes, can't you see? this love can't be empty...

(I want you to know
you're my best heartbreak, the greatest mistake, and a feeling i can't shake.
why can't you see
this love can't be empty.)

Maybe one day,
you'll wake up and miss me.

I want you to know
you're my best heartbreak, the greatest mistake, and a feeling i can't shake.
why can't you see
this love can't be empty.
Maybe one day,
you'll wake up and miss me.

When i'm gone...




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