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Do know you?


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 160
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Do know you?



...shattered on the floor is a picture of us
shadows whispering... look, what you've done
I feel so afraid, i'm living in shame, i didn't wanna let you down...

Do you know what it feels like
to scream out a name, of the person you loved
and it doesn't feel the same
and you know that it's gone, but you can't let go
Because your emotions take over,
and you think, you can't live on...

Roses of red wither to black
When you walked away there was no turning back
it's over it's over
Yeah, you didn't even look over your shoulder

Do you know what it feels like
to scream out a name, of the person you loved
and it doesn't feel the same
and you know that it's gone, but you can't let go
Because your emotions take over,
and you think, you can't live life on ...






Submitted on 2008-03-05 00:35:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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