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Sweet dreams...


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 200
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Sweet dreams...



Endlessly i'm devoted to you
so much i wish you knew
we've been through alot,
Now i want carry on with and only you...

Sweet dreams
my love i'll see you soon
One more day closer to you
Take my heart, and hold it tight
and i'll never let you down
i'll keep you safe all through the night...

Time stops for us again
a chance to make this moment last forever,
this love is all i got,
don't throw it away, i need you more than i did yesterday.

Sweet dreams
my love i'll see you soon
One more day closer to you
Take my heart, and hold it tight
and i'll never let you down
i'll keep you safe all through the night...

i'm here can you feel me, can you hear me, my heart beating...

Sweet dreams
my love i'll see you soon
One more day closer to you
Take my heart, and hold it tight
and i won't let you down
i'll keep you safe all through the night...

all through the night...

all through the night...

Sweet dreams, my love....




Submitted on 2008-03-05 00:38:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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   I felt this deep in my bones it made feel
like an effervescent bubble when I was 18 again
| Posted on 2008-03-07 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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