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Close to someday


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 185
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Close to someday



Tonight...
i lied awake
staring at the ceiling fan spinning
i couldn't sleep because of you.
yeah,you make me feel so brand new.

somehow someway
i'll see you someday
no matter how i get there
no matter how far
i hope you're waiting for me
you make it easier, to breathe....

Hours pass by
i find things to occupy my time
but my heart keeps yearning
your my star that keeps burning

it's like a teenage love story...
so cliché... but true

somehow someway
i'll see you someday
no matter how i get there
no matter how far
i hope you're waiting for me
you always make it easier to breathe

yeah, you always make it easier to breathe

somehow someway
i'll see you someday
no matter how i get there
no matter how far
i hope you're still waiting for me
you always make it easier to breath...






somehow someway
i'll see you someday...

and i hope your still waiting for me...





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