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    dots Submission Name: Why won't you stop?dots
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    Author: hawkeye
    ASL Info:    20/Female/Kentucky
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 9/18/10
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsWhy won't you stop?dots
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    You can't leave me here to face this world alone. You have to make it through this, otherwise I might not make it through my life. You just recently came back into my life and now theres a chance that you'll be leaving once again. Its not fair.

    Why do I get attached to people, when I know theres a chance they will just hurt me. I long for that feeling that will never go away. I want to meet someone who will not hurt me in any way. Is that even possible?

    All I want is to feel loved. Is that to much to ask for? I think not. And people wondered why I use to cut. By doing that I felt ten times better, because the physical I was able to endure. The emotional pain was just to much to bear. So can't you see that I'm hurting enough? Why won't you stop?




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