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    Author: being me
    Elite Ratio:    1.01 - 19/11/19
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       im in love.


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    he looked at me, from in the tree, true love at first site, he told me. i giggled, so hard i fell to my knees, he jumped down, helped me see... the way of true love is through the heart. all you need to know is how to start. start with me, ill make you happy, ill show you how to clime this tree, now... will you start with me?

    now years latter, we become to see, no matter how many others come and go, we ARE the ones ment to be...ill make YOU see...heheha. : )




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      awwwwww.
    this is so cute.
    i love this.
    this is so going on my favorites.

    great write.
    | Posted on 2008-03-06 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]


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