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    dots Submission Name: A King is Borndots
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    Author: 7makaveli
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 36/42/45
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 67
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       I honestly don't know what got into me...


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    dotsA King is Borndots
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    Ashes fall as if from a burning cloud,
    Makes the people scream out loud,
    A king is born, young and proud,
    His will, his strength, the sweat of his brow,
    He glares at the ground and opens his mouth,
    Destiny is my destination, I always come around,
    They're telling me to slow it down,
    But I can't do it now, I'm glowing now,
    Your claim to glory is not in my category
    I recite stories similar to biblical allegories,
    Take it as a chain of gold, which is our bond,
    Words could have been whispers, still remain strong,
    Through this lyrical firestorm, a king is born...




    Submitted on 2008-03-05 18:17:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Okay I recited that in whispering it was a good scheme. 4.5stars You could have made this a sonnet for more effect.I like it.You said you dont know wut got into you, maybe something good for the grace and sake of this poem.you should think about that for a while. RG
    | Posted on 2008-03-05 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]



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