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    Author: Blazing Eclipse
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 4/5/6
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    I'm hurting
    Disconcerting
    For no reason
    All displeasing

    I'm so lost
    Your looks like frost
    Stab my heart
    Ripped apart

    Wish you would say
    Wish you would stay
    Wish you would care
    For me that way

    No words are said
    What's us is dead
    There is no us
    Just only dust




    Submitted on 2008-03-06 17:08:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow.
    this was intense!!!
    this just basically sums up how i feel right now.
    love reading this.

    amazing write.
    | Posted on 2008-03-06 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]



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