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    dots Submission Name: Ai (Different Language)dots
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    Author: PrinceOfEvil666
    ASL Info:    16/M/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 4/5/7
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 633
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 422



    Description:
       I will post the translation after i am sure the person whom this poem is about can handle it.


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    dotsAi (Different Language)dots
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    Yuki
    Tes yuki yo no ni
    Tada shizuka ni
    Furi tsumori tszukata yo?
    Graspbe ne tght
    Konno omoi nara
    Me no bekis tamieh shoi
    Tamieh sos mata mata uks
    Demo ore...
    Ore su tunhing bek tas dakess
    Se graspbe ah smette tha tamieh
    Demo ore...
    Waze ore de ai tamieh stikis
    Mi hate ah dak
    Y se lii nunc hilk
    Bikisof ft tamieh ai




    Submitted on 2008-03-06 21:28:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      as much as i'd like to comment,
    i have no idea what you're saying
    | Posted on 2008-03-10 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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