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    dots Submission Name: Good Riddancedots
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    Author: panzyrocker
    ASL Info:    15/m/On
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 53/85/67
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGood Riddancedots
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    Washed up and all alone,
    looking through the wall of glass,
    unable to breath only to choke,
    good riddance to these bloody hands,
    good riddance to this life.

    Who knows what I've been through?
    This is the life i have,
    this is the life i choose,
    hollow and empty,
    the pathway is clear.

    Destined to run forever,
    alone in the world,
    except for the whispers,
    the whispers in my mind.

    No more time lieft for this,
    no time for this life,
    no time to love or hate,
    no time to remeber my name.













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