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    dots Submission Name: Sojourndots
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    Author: Dolor
    Elite Ratio:    4.49 - 62/83/49
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 47
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    Description:
       It may seem unfinished or of an odd ending placement, but maybe I stopped there for a reason. Can't tell. Also, I haven't really sat down and wrote for a couple months, so I may need to retune my skeelz.


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    dotsSojourndots
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    Encircle my ambitions and
    make them flourish; my conscience is
    my only home, and only time can nourish.

    The stepping stones in my mind
    fully focus on a dream:
    Hollow vessels, each a soul
    all of them redeemed.

    Encircle my pride and
    make it foolish; my conscience is
    a mind of its own, and only lies can it cherish.

    Linger in a clinged frenzy,
    a life without a warmth,
    a being travelling an undone course.




    Submitted on 2008-03-06 22:22:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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