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    dots Submission Name: Social Suicidedots
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    Author: mrmundane
    ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 47/88/61
    Words: 301
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 161
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 2233



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    dotsSocial Suicidedots
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    She
    Leaning inside a turfier of insides
    Battling those demons She held contained
    Mistakenly letting go of all that brick work
    Left there, forever; squeezing out an overcoat of stains
    Absorbing Flesh into flesh additionnnallll chemicalss
    Mespellin wooords all overrr the placeee
    It made little to no difference. Onwards.
    It was insecure to have forbidden herself to change
    Charge on...
    Into a new allegro
    Truant, fresh-faced
    Let in sunbeam serenades
    Dancing beneath your purpled ribcage
    Trek into a vibration of sounding range
    Together planted forever
    In the steamboats of cardinal Mississippi steam
    Forget all thems troubles, m' darlin'
    The points you've been staring at have been, in your eyes, backwards
    Even more wilderness will grow unseen
    As elastic firmly brushes the senses
    It bends into the sweet smell of futuristic chain-link fences
    Navigating by that forgotten north star
    Blinging in that ghetto strange
    As the brightness burns us brightly into our dazzling dreams
    Pupils dilate like those tree frogs' drinking dew drenched leaves
    Due...
    Due for that final exam
    The examination of holes in absolutes
    Of mad, manic academia
    Read with written quills
    Sometimes moralizers aren't moralizing the deviated
    And in mornings of decaffeinated retrospection
    Plucking within at inner coals
    Those cobbled stress tests fail with gentle pulls
    and when the black and black lines hinder
    and red lines and white lines and the yellow win our favor
    Tapping into these unilateral taboos
    Stripping thoughts to the bare absence of chatter
    Into a purgation of clutter, about to explode
    Just a stupefied expression describes just how relaxing it had been
    To finally click into who i was and what, the hell, i'd been
    To experience the truest sublineation never learned but simply known
    To seclude the ego to it's vacation home
    Everything in a perfect, sublime, cease
    In this untarnished
    Now.




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