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    dots Submission Name: Suicide Kissdots
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    Author: Zabriel
    ASL Info:    18/MI
    Elite Ratio:    4.88 - 116/113/48
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 289
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    Description:
       This is about death freeing me from a love that was killing me. I'll leave you to interpret the rest.


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    Bittersweet surrender
    Death holds promises of that which has been denied
    Release
    Unequaled release
    Full-body orgasm
    Spilling my vitae upon the ground
    And then
    Silence
    Glorious silence
    Your face flashes in my mind
    And I feel the last remnants
    Of this soul-destroying love fade away
    Darkness washes over
    Warm and comforting
    Sleep
    Unbroken and dreamless
    Awakening
    The Earth rising in the sky
    You’re down there somewhere
    I pray there you remain
    Death has given me freedom from life
    And I can begin anew
    I’m looking forward to this Life
    Without you




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