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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.86 - 252/248/195
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 91
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 561



    Description:
       Chris


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    I'm glad I'm able
    to be in your life.
    I love when I'm
    around you,
    the butterflies
    in my stomach,
    when I blush.
    I love when you laugh,
    echoes booming off the walls.
    I even love
    when you make me nervous,
    the usually tiny
    pitter-patter
    of my heart,
    pounding against my chest.
    Or the tremors
    throughout my body
    when I kissed you.
    The world around us froze.
    There was no space,
    no time,
    just us.




    Submitted on 2008-03-07 10:49:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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