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    dots Submission Name: momdots
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    Author: Blood†Tears
    ASL Info:    16...who cares.my head
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 22/16/20
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 71
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1391



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       i got in a fight w/ my mom... it wasn't fun


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    dotsmomdots
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    Is there anything thats possible to feel
    is there any bit of life left in you
    do you like to see these broken tears i cry
    to you like to know the pain you cause is ture.

    i only wanted some space to myself
    just a little time on my own
    instead i got a explosion
    and now i wish this wansn't my home.

    your hands around my throat
    bring out the worst in me
    they re-veil the cold man
    that you could never ever see
    and while the violence runs
    in circles in my head
    i continue to hold it in
    I continue to hide this.
    and while the tension between us builds up
    our patience crumbles down.
    all i ever wanted was a mother
    but now i just want someone other
    then you.

    arguments
    turn to hate
    and that begins to escalate
    words sharper then swords
    cut through the air
    nothing ever hurt worse
    but sides you lies.
    the i love yous.
    all those lies.
    were never true.

    if these feelings could be erased
    you know i would erease them.
    i would take back the things i said
    and never ever say them.
    why do you feel differently
    why don't you care
    i thought you were a mother
    i thought you'd always be there...




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