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    dots Submission Name: What Have You Done?dots
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    Author: AngelicDisaster
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsWhat Have You Done?dots
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    I gave you my heart
    But when you gave it back, it was torn apart
    Dead and withering like a rose
    I lie still dreaming with my eyes closed
    Thoughts of us still race through my mind
    Still, I want one last time
    One more time to hold you
    one more time to whisper in your ear
    one more time to show you
    and one more time to hold you dear
    You threw my heart back in my face
    now I cut my arms in shame
    because of all this pain
    I'm ready to die tonight
    with tear filled eyes
    all over the heart-ache you left me with
    I can't stand it any longer
    so now I take my dieing breath
    and whisper "if only I was stronger"




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