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    dots Submission Name: I beleieve in youdots
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    Author: Little Gal
    ASL Info:    20 female, Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 469/431/94
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI beleieve in youdots
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    Brutalized at every moment of my life
    Feeling insecurity always
    At every place I set my avenue
    Every soul I confronted
    I surely felt i would be mistreated
    As you encountered my life
    I gave no importance
    To the concept of what you expect
    Or if you did not lik me
    Your words and love
    Are so truthful in my eyes
    No matter what the case
    I believe in you





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      mmmm i like it was so many of your posts for me are too short i feel if you just went even slightly further it would make them that much better!!! I enjoyed this just feel it could be more

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2010-01-17 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      in many way this is abt ur life and ur feelings much as a result of wat u have been thro...
    apart from that this is yet another beauty from u and i right now am reading only ur works and that too after a long time...
    great
    bye
    | Posted on 2004-07-02 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]


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