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    dots Submission Name: An apologydots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAn apologydots
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    I have been a jerk
    and I am sorry for many things.
    Snipped at with ferocious secateurs
    for the weed
    I was becoming.

    Left me scarred
    but wholer.

    Scared
    but more in touch with my Self.




    Submitted on 2008-03-08 05:52:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wholer? i'm not sure.
    I have been a jerk
    and I am sorry for many things.


    me too. me too.

    the last bit:
    Scared
    but more in touch with my Self.


    this has me all kinds of messed up. why scared?
    not in a bad way messed up but in a curious way. maybe it's because I don't think I could ever capitalize my Self. I have a hard time hitting the caps lock for i. maybe it's because i don't have any Self esteem. i have plenty of self esteem but it just gets in the way.
    i suppose i can see how i would be scared if my Self was capitalized.

    this has been fun. and thought provoking.
    interestingly (for me anyway) i read this after i read your latest "a prayer" where i also noticed my Self, so i went looking and found my Self here too. scary.
    | Posted on 2009-05-09 00:00:00 | by milovelocity | [ Reply to This ]
      The last two couplets are amazing.
    Unsurprisingly: I had to look up secateurs.
    | Posted on 2008-03-10 00:00:00 | by MC white | [ Reply to This ]


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