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    dots Submission Name: Unlike The Curedots
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    Author: Nessyjane
    ASL Info:    21/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    0.68 - 97/60/44
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotsUnlike The Curedots
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    Unlike the cure I cough up blood
    Iím not like hope, I donít see the light
    I canít be stronger, Iíve become broken
    After all is said, I still have to hide
    You see me, along with all the lies
    The truth, perfect just as long as it leaves
    The moment so real, but my life becomes fake
    Donít whisper sweet words that echo lies
    Confusion is apart of my life, I need no more




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