Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Untitled(for now)dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: angelfyre
    ASL Info:    17/yes please/here
    Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 254/238/76
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 880



    Description:
       this is how it is


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsUntitled(for now)dots
    -------------------------------------------


    My thoughts are like hail
    I am like hail.
    Hail they scrape from their view
    And as I swirl around this hell in a dandelion
    I see the world in plaid boxes.
    But they don’t want me to see at all.
    I know how to play their morbid game
    And put my swords against the morbid name.
    But all that ends up crying from my tongue is sorry.
    I just wait for this pictures headache to go away.
    Wait as the herds of vomit carry me away.
    I’m dripping in their experience
    Coated with their hearts seizures.
    They kick me with legs attached to spinal cords of demons.
    And I know how to ride the wall,
    But all I end up saying is sorry.
    My knees have to tremble to stay inside,
    I have to sit in the needles to stay warm.
    I’m the man on the sand, and he will grab my hand.




    Submitted on 2008-03-08 19:36:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      On the beach is where petals wash up my love, I will always take your hand and guide you away from that anguish, you know that.
    You let their words sink in, and they will continue to use them, this work is so full of pain, the needles should turn into cushion as soon as you kiss me my love, those demons will not ride you forever, as long as you are with me, I will keep telling you that you need not appologize for being so beautiful, perfect to me...:*)
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Reckoner | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.