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    dots Submission Name: Extinctiondots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    60/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 721/554/166
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsExtinctiondots
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    Robin’s absence casts a chill.
    Spring’s a ghost; renewal’s nil.
    Global warming’s melt has won;
    Puddles face a burning sun.
    There’s no baseball, kites, or ice;
    humanity has paid the price.
    From lengthening disregard,
    Earth is just a big graveyard.




    Submitted on 2008-03-08 20:06:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sharon, the points you made in this piece actually make me glad that I am closer to the grave than the cradle. Those coming behind us are going to have one helluva time.


    Pete
    | Posted on 2008-06-07 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen! We must, as a race, go back to respecting nature and this piece is short and to the point!

    Great!
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I think old country boys like me are facing extinction, so I thought, for a moment, you had written a poem about me!!!!

    Nice work, Sharon! Looks like another challenge?
    | Posted on 2008-03-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This was written fantasically! Short, but to the point. I love it. I feel the same way. People don't seem to care that we are beating the life out of the very thign that gives us ours. It's sad. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-03-08 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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