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    Author: lost_and_forgotten
    ASL Info:    16/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 45/54/32
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 49
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 940



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       just cleaning my computer.. making sure if it crashes i dont lose all this stuff


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    I bite my tongue so u don't have to
    I can't say anything without being afraid
    I don't want to set you off
    But I don't know how much more of this I can take

    U say it's not me
    Then how come it only happens when I'm around
    And the stupidest things
    Send us crashing to the ground

    I feel like you don't trust me
    Like I can't talk to you anymore
    I censor my life
    To keep you from going off again

    I lie awake
    after conversations filled with yea, uhuhs
    worrying I said something wrong
    and you left to get away from me

    I can't believe I have to say this
    i never thought i'd have to do this again
    I can't believe I can't even tell you
    hell why am i even writing this

    your never going to read any of this anyway




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      This was written very well. I'm not sure if if you meant it to be personal thoughts, rant, or whatever, but it was a good vent anyway. I know how you feel, my ex made me feel the same way. Hope everything heads for the better. Keep up thre great work, and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-03-08 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]



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