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    dots Submission Name: This Moment Nowdots
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    Author: forfila
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 354/310/188
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThis Moment Nowdots
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    Its as if you can really see me
    And in this moment, you free me
    Lifted in an all knowing bliss
    Drifting in the clouds, touched by their soft kiss
    Listening to heartís sounds
    Gliding in light winds
    Together we roam
    As one we exist




    Submitted on 2008-03-09 04:23:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aaah, this is lovely! Revelation, when it comes, is awsome and beautiful!

    This is spectacular:

    "Listening to heartís sounds!
    Gliding in light winds!
    Together we roam,
    As one we exist!"

    Awesome!
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so cute...... you have captured a beautiful moment so accurately.

    This is an image of heaven, no? where delicate souls walk together and even pass through each other.

    Lovely!
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]


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