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    dots Submission Name: Fear Notdots

    Author: forfila
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 354/310/188
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsFear Notdots

    In a blind walk, those who oppress are easily viewed as enemies
    But in learning of the stresses they dwell in, a hand is the righteous offer.
    Never a hate for the individuals walk
    But questions for the collective heart who is the harvester of souls

    No longer cold, I walk beside
    No longer alone, I trust in few and confide
    Searching under locked paths of mind, bringing reasoning
    Bringing new trains of thought to unwind

    Do not suffer the silent downfall
    Love and cherish loves opportunity
    The future of all children at stake
    Put a sleepers spell on the seeds of sorrow that lay in wake

    Change is loves dawn
    For you
    For one, and for all
    Never will your song sleep
    Forever you will breath
    Forever you will be
    Riding the fortunes time will see

    2008 Matthew

    Submitted on 2008-03-09 04:27:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A wise unknown philosopher once said "change is the only thing that is constant in the world"!

    I love this"

    "Change is love's dawn!
    For you;
    For one, and for all!
    Never will your song sleep!"
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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