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    dots Submission Name: Time Will Telldots

    Author: forfila
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    dotsTime Will Telldots

    Where are we headed in this world
    Has fate predetermined our destiny
    Are we destined to return to righteous,
    Or have we travelled a wrong path for too long
    Do we now search for non existent answers.

    I clutch hope for its purpose
    But is my grasp in earnest
    It hurts when,
    we try so hard to do right,
    yet there are those who choose hate
    and willingly display it before our eyes.

    will they ever get a grasp of the spirit
    or is self centered ness destined to reign over the wider humanity
    Is the pain to great for some,
    the anger too much in their ancestry to forgive
    If so
    Then which becomes the greater sin.

    Will we ever manage to move toward a common cause
    Will we ever be able to rid leaders of the now necessary power of force
    Will we ever be as one accord
    Will we ever learn that love is the source.

    Will our efforts be in vein
    Will we have to witness the torture of humanities "realizing too late"
    Will we continue to push tomorrow,
    or will we learn to seize the day.

    You are the light
    and you are the way
    You were a King among men
    and my love for you shall stay

    Teach me to teach,
    teach me to reach
    and teach me to be all I can be.

    2008 Matthew

    Submitted on 2008-03-09 04:29:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thanks for sharing this Matt! There is so much beauty and at the same time so much pain - I believe each of contributes with our thoughts and we have to trust in the unknown and the spiritual and manifest that which is heaven already on earth

    I really connected to this piece and you did a wonderful job in presenting it!

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      "Teach me to teach,
    teach me to reach
    and teach me to be all I can be."

    This was excellent, Matt! There will always be despots and tyrants that come to power in the world, and, as long as there are, there will be a need for strong, brave men and governments to not just depose, but destroy them (else we will all become subjects and ruled by tyranny)!

    Sad, but that is the nature of things and the way it's always been! A tyrannical government even crucified the only really good man who ever lived!

    This was an excellent, profound, and philosophical write! Bravo!

    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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