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    dots Submission Name: angelsdots
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    Author: thewantedwords
    ASL Info:    28 male sydney
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 40/40/37
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 55
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 362



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    Touched by a angel i think this is so,
    Forever burning is the eternal flow,
    Bright as the sky in the land above,
    showing me warmth and showing me love,
    Take my hand and lead me the way,
    Cause in my heart is were you will stay,
    I keep this in mind i dont know why,
    Please dont let this be our last goodbye.




    Submitted on 2008-03-09 22:50:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There are a few errors here:

    Touched by an angel I think this is so,
    Forever burning is the eternal flow,
    Bright as the sky in the land above,
    Showing me warmth and showing me love,
    Take my hand and lead me the way,
    Because in my heart is were you will stay,
    I keep this in mind though I dont know why,
    Please don't let this be our last goodbye.


    Just the changes I would make. Good write overall though.
    | Posted on 2008-03-10 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]



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