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    dots Submission Name: THIS FRIEND CALLED JESUSdots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
    Total Views: 622
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 933



    Description:
       A SONG I WROTE IN THE LATE EIGHTYS


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    dotsTHIS FRIEND CALLED JESUSdots
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    (V1) IV`E GOT A FRIEND, HIS NAME IS JESUS;
    HE`S MORE TO ME, THAN I CAN SAY;
    HE`S LIKE NO OTHER, IV`E EVER KNOWN;
    IV`E GOT A FRIEND THATS EVER TRUE.

    (V2) IV`E GOT A FRIEND, HIS NAME IS JESUS;
    HE`S MORE TO ME, THAN JUST A FRIEND;
    FOR HE`S MY LORD, MY MASTER AND SAVEYOUR,
    HE`S MORE TO ME; THAN I WILL EVER NEED.

    (V3) WHEN I AM SAD, TORMENTED AND TROUBLED;
    I KNOW HE CARES, FOR HE IS THERE;
    HE TAKES MY PAIN AND HE TAKES MY SORROW,
    TURNS THEM TO JOY; FOREVER MORE.

    (CHORSE) THIS FRIEND CALLED JESUS,
    HE DIED ON CALVERY;
    TO WASH MY SINS AWAY AND SET ME FREE,
    OH WHAT A WORNDERFUL FRIEND THIS MUST BE;
    TO DIE FOR SOMEONE SOMEONE LIKE ME.


    (LAST CHOURSE REPEAT)--
    OH WHAT A WORNDERFUL FRIEND THIS MUST BE;
    TO DIE FOR SOMEONE, SOMEONE LIKE ME.




    Submitted on 2008-03-10 01:26:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked the message in this. Jesus is there and will always be there for us; even when we abandon him, he never abandons us.

    He is our closest friend, and so much more, for he is our Lord.
    | Posted on 2008-03-10 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]


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