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    dots Submission Name: To the Girldots
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    Author: MC white
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71/73/45
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTo the Girldots
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    My baby girl
    to sleep, you fell
    I hope that you
    are dreaming well
    and in your dreams
    I hope you know,
    know that my love
    won't let me show
    my darker sides
    or tell the truth
    and that these doubts
    have taken root
    deep in my heart
    and I'm unsure
    if we will last
    I sigh, demure
    and put back on
    my boyfriend face
    my cowardice
    my cold embrace




    Submitted on 2008-03-10 01:40:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. This was like a bucket of icewater dumped down my spine. This was the short, brutal, perfectly put wording of the deepest fear in my heart. My god, I am hurt just thinking of this. Not a word out of place. This is horrifying, brutal, honest, and painful. This has got to be the most emotionally evocative poem I have ever read.
    | Posted on 2008-03-10 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]


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