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    dots Submission Name: Made of Stonedots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 862/761/201
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 123
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    dotsMade of Stonedots
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    Vision blurs.
    Words slur.
    Every joint is aching,
    Every muscle shaking.

    Only a keyboard touch connection to the real world -
    If this is
    The real world,
    I don't ever want to go to sleep.
    Let my body waste away
    And I will still be writing poetry
    To the way you say my name.

    Wait for
    The flashing orange light...
    A few words of sympathy
    To get me through the night.

    I want to be near you
    I can't stomach life alone right now.
    My hands want to touch you,
    To comfort and justify you
    Feel your heart beat
    Through the crimson heat
    I want to be alive.

    You are my lifeline
    Beside you I'll make it through somehow
    You're all I can hope for
    I need to be where you are right now.

    Nothing's real,
    Nothing's real here and I'm dying in my lies
    Suffocating as I lie awake and cry.

    I'm dying without you
    This is a plea for help;
    I'm fading fast.
    A person isn't made of stone
    And this body wasn't built to be alone.




    Submitted on 2008-03-11 05:04:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I haven't read any of your work in a while, and so I hope this isn't autobiographical. There is not much to say about the style or form since it reads more like a personal thought.
    It's amazing how real people become to us, even online, or maybe especially on-line since we have to communicate. I'm not sure how much I trust this type of realtionship because I think people can conceal things too easily, but i know that I tell some of my online friends things I don't tell the friends I see everyday.

    jan
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]



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