The Last Leaf by Razorain

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Submission Name: The Last Leaf dots

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Author:	Razorain
Elite Ratio:	3.33 - 24/24/9
Words:	37

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	52
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	217

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The Last Leaf dots

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As I am bound to leave
Pass I shall these words brief
Here in this one last leaf
Sheer quintessence I weave

Where is this last leaf you ask?
Were a child will laugh till dusk

Submitted on 2008-03-11 05:06:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I like this, the format makes it seem as though it were the end of a sonnet. Um, I also think you have a missing H in here. Not sure, maybe I just don;t get what you are driving at:

Were a child will laugh till dusk

Where a child will laugh till dusk?
| Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]

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