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    dots Submission Name: lets talkdots
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    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    19/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 531/223/75
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotslets talkdots
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    Let’s talk
    Us
    (And by "us" I mean you)
    You talk
    And I’ll listen
    (And by "listen"
    I mean ignore)
    So let’s try again...

    You talk
    And I’ll listen
    But really you’ll talk
    (And when I say "talk"
    I mean lie)
    But that’s okay
    Cause when I say listen
    We both know I mean ignore

    So we can sit here
    You lying
    And me ignoring
    Just taking up space
    Neither of us can move on

    You know I know you’re lying
    I know you know I’m ignoring
    How else can we find another match like each other?

    Someone to let you lie and not get hurt
    Someone to let me ignore and not be offended





    Submitted on 2008-03-11 15:51:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really like this its great...i'm going to fav it...i've had moments like this with people i've known...you captured it quite well and i like the sarcasm behind the words..purps
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the sort of fact theat we all do this in our head. We kinda all step out side ourselves in frozen time during a conversation and critique other people or we even admit to ourselfs that what that persons says--well frankly we don't care . The realism and the actuall ability to but me back in the shoes i fill. Truth. andwho wouldn't like to hear that every once in a while. It's gotten kind of hard for me on this website cause I can't find much i would even care to gie a comment for but you and a few othe are making this stay quite bearable, thank you.
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      "You talk and I’ll listen (and by "listen", I mean ignore)"
    Hahaha- that's awesome!
    I like the way this one is written. "And when I say "talk"
    I mean lie"... Good stuff! What a fu<ked-up couple... Wait, I think I'm IN this relationship!?! Oh, man...
    !lolful!
    Peace, love and pancakes made with crack-cocaine instead of Bisquick*
    -Ceyx
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by Ceyx | [ Reply to This ]



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