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    dots Submission Name: The Language Of Lovedots

    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Something we all should be able to relate to.

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    dotsThe Language Of Lovedots

    There is a special language
    That we all can understand
    There is no need to speak it
    Or to sign it with your hand
    Everyone upon this earth
    And regardless of their race
    Will recognise each letter
    And so put them in their place

    This language, it can speak a truth
    That is far beyond compare
    With no lies or double meaning
    Or any innuendos there
    It teaches us the ways of life
    From he cradle to the grave
    And gives us strength to face up to
    Lifeís biggest tidal wave

    This language reaches deep inside
    Our heart and spirit too
    It gives a reason to believe
    For me, as well as you
    Come joyous times, with happy days
    Or when life, it hurts us so
    This language, it will see us through
    More than you will ever know

    You can speak it from within your heart
    So everyone can hear
    And your message will be understood
    From far away and near
    You can hear it on the gentle breeze
    As it blows from high above
    A universal language
    Itís the language of true love

    Submitted on 2008-03-11 17:04:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow..this is one of the greatest poems I have ever read. When I was reading it..it gave me this feeling of..hope. Like love really is as great as people say..true love at least. It's very well written. Just amazing.
    | Posted on 2008-03-17 00:00:00 | by Jeka | [ Reply to This ]
      You speak fluently in this poem, Frank.
    The third stanza is my favorite. Love gives a reason to believe in just about anything...
    its the foundation for hope, I think.
    Thanks for a lovely read.
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      Outstanding! The philosophers say "love conquers all", and so it shall be! This is a language of which more should be spoken!

    Now, if I can just find some lovely lady that wants to chat!!!

    This is superb, Frank!
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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