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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: PrinceOfEvil666
    ASL Info:    16/M/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 4/4/5
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 225
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 468



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    dotsLovedots
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    Snow
    The snow falling gently
    Will it continue to fall?
    The pile is getting higher and higher
    Hold me tight
    This is how it feels
    I don't believe you anymore
    You say many many things
    But I...
    I am turning back to the darkness
    The hold is gentlier than yours
    But I...
    Why do I love you still?
    My heart is black
    And forever surounded in ice
    Because of your love




    Submitted on 2008-03-11 17:05:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aww i like this one!!!

    it reminds me so much of myself when i was younger...mmm nostalgia.. good on toast

    any whoo i think this peice was well crafted and i love the sense of dark bitter resentment
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]



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